Predators Unleashed – Shark First Dating Business Software

Monday, 15. May 2006 - 5:41 pm

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PR WEB — May 11 — Shark dating business software 1.0 is determined to make a dating business profitable. This is implemented via number of business tools… FULL ARTICLE @ PR WEB

Mark Brooks: OK, stop right there. I've seen a few of these Russian company press releases…and they're scary. You MUST get your English right on your website, software and press releases to inspire any level of confidence in your software and services.


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  1. Artur

    Dear Mark,

    i am the guy who actually has written this particular PR.

    1) “press releases…and they’re scary”

    Can you please clarify what exactly in terms of English is scary there?

    2)”You MUST get your English right on your website”

    Not to get into peculiarities of English and not intending to get some lessons of English from you, can you point out, if this is ever possible, where exactly on our site we need to get our English right?

    Regards,

    Artur

    P.S. Kyrgyzstan is not Russia, nor our company is a Russian one. I could follow your example and tell you “get right with your geography” but i wouldn’t do it.

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